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01-29-2007, 07:15 AM blawlashi Joined on 11-20-2005 Posts 11,815 souria dot com .. the story Part one - The Making of     (Za3boot’s office .. he’s wearing thick glasses .. and drinking black coffee .. door opens and blawlashi comes in .. za3boot holds a bunch of paper and waves them at blawlashi)   Za3boot: what is this? Blawlashi: erm .. this is the play sir! Za3boot: and you have got the nerves to tell me that this is a play? (about to explode) Blawlashi: well .. Za3boot: well what? Blawlashi: you have asked for a new method of playwriting and there you go (with an uncertain smile) ..erm .. a thriller .. something new to the art of the stage Za3boot: do you call a man-woman experience on an island inhabited by a monster a thriller?!! I call it BULLSHIT   (A knock on the door .. Lost enters with the coffee) (Za3boot tries it and spits all over the place )   Za3boot: do you call this coffee? God what did I do to be surrounded with a bunch of idiots .. get out and make me a real coffee (screaming)   Lostparadise: okay sir (he falls on the way out .. and everything is broken .. he gathers the broken pieces in a haste and leaves the room)   Blawlashi: ok then .. just give me a couple of weeks to think of something new .. Za3boot: I don’t have a couple of weeks you moron .. we have reserved the stage for the weekend .. and all the tickets are sold .. and you want a couple of weeks? What am I going to tell the management? What am I gonna tell my guests? My God I’m screwed (covers his face with his hands) Blawlashi: don’t worry sir .. I promise you that you’re gonna have the show of your life .. I just need to consult a couple of friends .. Za3boot: a couple of friends? And what kind of friends morons like you have? super morons? (angrily) Blawlashi: don’t you worry Mr. Za3boot .. just keep inviting people to the play .. and rest assured Za3boot: we don’t even have a name for the play .. we have to put some ads in the streets .. or is that not important? (sarcastically) Blawlashi: a name? Hmmmm .. for the time being .. just tell the press company to print out the title “souria dot com .. the story”   To be continued … مقسومين .. لك قوم فوت نام وصير حلام    Report

01-29-2007, 07:32 AM blawlashi Joined on 11-20-2005 Posts 11,815 Re: souria dot com .. the story continued from before   (Blawlashi enters his office depressed .. falls hard on his wheel chair which breaks and he falls to the ground .. he stands up as bassel enters)   Bassel: what's going on man? Blawlashi: dude .. I'm totally screwed Bassel: what happened .. I heard Za3boot screaming Blawlashi: well .. guess what .. I have 3 days to write down a play .. and I don't know what it's going to look like Bassel: oh don't worry man .. you can always come up with something   Blawlashi looks away from Bassel Sadly .. Tomato enters   Tomato: hey .. (whispers to bassel)  what's wrong with him? Bassel: he has three days to write a play .. God be with him   Sanjoob enters   Sanjoob: howdy (whispers to bassel and Tomato) is Blawlashi okay? Tomato and Bassel: he has three days to write a play .. God be with him   God enters .. no I'm kidding   Ceasar enters .. his talent I mean   Blawlashi: I found it All: what .. what did you find? Blawlashi: a story ..an idea All: (waiting for the idea) Blawlashi: us .. here .. this place .. souria dot com (hastly) Bassel: oh .. I gotta go watch over my Oliva' Tomato: oh .. I have a flight to Amsterdam Sanjoob: I have nothing to do .. I'm going anyway   they all leave Blawlashi as he brings out his notebook and starts writing   to be continued ...   مقسومين .. لك قوم فوت نام وصير حلام    Report

01-29-2007, 07:52 AM m83 Joined on 11-20-2005 Posts 1,294 Re: souria dot com .. the story You really don't know how to post a bad topic Am happy to be the first to rate your topic please keep going    Report

01-29-2007, 07:58 AM AmeRiCanCoFFee Joined on 12-20-2005 Dubai Posts 8,264 Re: souria dot com .. the story good work buddy      Report

01-29-2007, 08:06 AM Jazmine Joined on 03-04-2006 Posts 294 Re: souria dot com .. the story nice stuff, rich imagination be the best one in your block    Report

01-29-2007, 08:06 AM Tomato_83 Joined on 11-20-2005 Posts 6,409 Re: souria dot com .. the story  blawlashi wrote: Tomato: oh .. I have a flight to Amsterdam hahaaaa   good stuff! please continue    Report

01-29-2007, 09:33 AM yasmmen Joined on 10-10-2006 Posts 6,575 Re: souria dot com .. the story So sweet  …. Keep going شامنا ....... فرجة    Report

01-29-2007, 10:04 AM LostParadise Joined on 11-20-2005 داخل الصندوق Posts 6,543 Re: souria dot com .. the story LostParadise in his kitchen so lonly and sad...... he silently hanged himself to the chandrella with a hoze..... saying his last pray (alla yakhdek ylle kente elsbab).... and boom.... he kicked the chiar away.... and then..... the whole world started to fade away..... he struggled for awhile to catch a breath.... but no use..... in his very last moments.... he saw a shinig medow..... full of his favorite flower..... the tulip..... he finally could take one last breath to smell the tulip field..... and then..... he disapeared.   صالة أنابيبو للذة الحرام    Report

01-29-2007, 11:08 AM blawlashi Joined on 11-20-2005 Posts 11,815 Re: souria dot com .. the story It's getting dark and everyone has left .. except for Blawlashi who is all over his writings .. Lost paradise comes out from the kitchen .. he's staggering as if he has fallen from a height .. he enteres Blawlashi's room who was not paying attention Lostparadise: Mr. Blawlashi .. would you like to have anything before I go? Blawlashi: (Without lifting one eyebrow) No .. Abu Haitham ..  but thank you Lostparadise: (calmly .. but sadly) erm .. Mr. Blawlashi .. I heard you are preparing something for the stage .. and I was wondering if I can have a part .. anything to do .. you know .. we are approaching the end of the month Blawlashi: (still not looking) sure .. just let me think of something for you Lostparadise (with a sad voice) thank you sir .. God bless you Lost was about to leave when Blawlashi raised his head and called him Blawlashi: Abu Haitham Lost: erm .. yes? Blawlashi: are you okay? I believe I can see red lines on your neck .. as if someone was trying to strangle you! Lost: these? erm .. no .. actually it's my son Haitham .. maybe when he was playing in the kitchen he did this Blawlashi: by the way how old is he? your son I mean? Lost: (Trying to remember) I .. don't ... well he's about 10 Blawlashi: I believe I can find him a role in the play .. I have some characters on my mind about his age .. lots of them indeed .. and I really can get rid of them in favour of Haitham .. of course if you are interested Lost: (Thinking) erm .. but are you going .. erm .. you know .. to .. pay him? Blawlashi: of course .. we pay by the hour .. just bring him over and let me see what can I do Lost: (happily like a child) Thank you .. Thank you so much (Looks towards the sky and whispers) Thank you too   To be continued .. مقسومين .. لك قوم فوت نام وصير حلام    Report

01-29-2007, 11:12 AM matrix01 Joined on 11-19-2005 Posts 15,488 Re: souria dot com .. the story very nice      Report

01-29-2007, 11:55 AM silva_silva Joined on 03-05-2006 الأرض العتيقة حيث القدر يبتسم للشجعان Posts 4,586 Re: souria dot com .. the story  blawlashi wrote: he's staggering as if he has fallen from a height .. he enteres Blawlashi's room who was not paying attention Blawlashi: (Without lifting one eyebrow) Lostparadise: (calmly .. but sadly) Blawlashi: (still not looking) Lostparadise (with a sad voice) thank you sir .. God bless you Lost: (happily like a child) Thank you .. Thank you so much (Looks towards the sky and whispers) Thank you too i feel so bad 3la abo haitham poor إن لم تستح فافعل ما تشاء    Report

01-29-2007, 12:41 PM maz_java Joined on 12-14-2005 Posts 3,011 Re: souria dot com .. the story  blawlashi wrote: It's getting dark and everyone has left .. except for Blawlashi who is all over his writings .. when i read this part i hear a sad violin playing in my head.....nice man.    Report

01-29-2007, 07:36 PM LOGO Joined on 11-19-2005 SYR Posts 22,698 Re: souria dot com .. the story it's really good.... and full with feelings wonderful, Blawlashi go ahead.. وطني.... يا عز ما بينهان    Report

01-30-2007, 10:25 AM blawlashi Joined on 11-20-2005 Posts 11,815 Re: souria dot com .. the story It was morning time .. nothing could be heard around except the sipping sound of coffee and tea .. everybody is busy doing something .. suddenly Blawlashi comes out of his room .. jumps over shamsouri's Table who is looking at him angrily Blawlashi: alright everybody .. I have an announcement to make Yasmeen: (to herself) oh no! Blawlashi: (to Yasmeen) don't worry I'm not gonna propose to you Yasmeen sinks into her chair shyly Blawlashi: alright .. as you are all aware I have been writing a play for Mr. Za3boot .. and today .. I have finished the final part Matrix: (disgusted) Bravo .. Bravo .. why don't you hold out your speaker and walk the streets to announce it to the public? Blawlashi: patience amigo .. patience .. because the play is gonna be about you guys .. by you .. and to you Mzanber: (smiling to the others) oh he's quoting me again Blawlashi: Ladies and Gentelemen in souria.com .. you are gonna be the boxoffice heroes .. you are gonna act in my next play Lostparadise: My son is gonna be there too (almost crying proudly of his son) mt1985: alright .. I have been working here for ages .. and I wanna have a leading role or I'm leaving Alpha: (smiling all the time) we don't need to argue about the heroine .. obviously I'm the most successful, most pretty and not to mention .. most smart of all Americancoffee: I can be a narrator .. I can make people listen passionately A chaotic arguning takes place in the mean while .. Blawlashi is perplexed by it Blawlashi: (screaming at the top of his lungs) silence no use .. the chaos continues .. Blawlashi leaves the place angrily   To be continued ... مقسومين .. لك قوم فوت نام وصير حلام    Report

01-30-2007, 11:02 AM AmeRiCanCoFFee Joined on 12-20-2005 Dubai Posts 8,264 Re: souria dot com .. the story yalla yalla common man i'm anxious to know whats gonna happen it's really great  i'm lovin it    Report

01-30-2007, 11:04 AM yasmmen Joined on 10-10-2006 Posts 6,575 Re: souria dot com .. the story   Perfect …..  I liked Alpha part ….. Please continue شامنا ....... فرجة    Report

01-30-2007, 11:04 AM matrix01 Joined on 11-19-2005 Posts 15,488 Re: souria dot com .. the story    Report

01-30-2007, 11:15 AM yasmmen Joined on 10-10-2006 Posts 6,575 Re: souria dot com .. the story  matrix01 wrote:   I really feel sorry for him ….. if it's me I'd die in a heart attack Balwoshi … may I translated your topic into Arabic ????   شامنا ....... فرجة    Report

01-30-2007, 01:16 PM blawlashi Joined on 11-20-2005 Posts 11,815 Re: souria dot com .. the story  yasmmen wrote: Balwoshi … may I translated your topic into Arabic ????   ehhhh ya zaman .. who would've thought a day will come when people would translate for me!! مقسومين .. لك قوم فوت نام وصير حلام    Report

01-30-2007, 01:40 PM matrix01 Joined on 11-19-2005 Posts 15,488 Re: souria dot com .. the story shu sar bel barnamej abu shreeeeeeeek???      Report

01-30-2007, 01:52 PM yasmmen Joined on 10-10-2006 Posts 6,575 Re: souria dot com .. the story  blawlashi wrote: ehhhh ya zaman .. who would've thought a day will come when people would translate for me!!     Don't get do proud of your self …. I think of it as a favor for people who can't understand English ….. Not you !!!!!!! Any way …. Forget it ….. I'm not interested any more .... You don't deserve the publicity   شامنا ....... فرجة    Report

01-30-2007, 02:01 PM blawlashi Joined on 11-20-2005 Posts 11,815 Re: souria dot com .. the story what I meant is that since I'm a translator, I translate for people and not the other way round   201 - and I thought driving cars was their worst thing مقسومين .. لك قوم فوت نام وصير حلام    Report

01-30-2007, 06:41 PM AmeRiCanCoFFee Joined on 12-20-2005 Dubai Posts 8,264 Re: souria dot com .. the story  yasmmen wrote:      I'm not interesting any more ....   رحم الله امرء ٍ ( شخص ) عرف قدر نفسه فوقف عنده    Report

01-30-2007, 08:01 PM Golden_French_Kiss Joined on 12-08-2005 Posts 13,269 Re: souria dot com .. the story  matrix01 wrote: shu sar bel barnamej abu shreeeeeeeek???   wnt 3aloush rab el English klo Wallah ma 3reftak w inta 3am tragel bl inklizi €    Report

01-30-2007, 11:52 PM yasmmen Joined on 10-10-2006 Posts 6,575 Re: souria dot com .. the story  AmeRiCanCoFFee wrote:  yasmmen wrote:      I'm not interesting any more ....   رحم الله امرء ٍ ( شخص ) عرف قدر نفسه فوقف عنده يخز العين حولك .... عربي انكليزي شغال شامنا ....... فرجة    Report

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